Punctuation Two
How to use colons and apostrophes
Colons (:)
A colon is mainly used to introduce a list or a series:
Example 1: An assistant is required who can do the following: input data, write reports, and complete tax forms.
Example 2: Wilson et al. (2012) discuss a variety of factors affecting social mobility, namely: education; cultural 鈥榗apital鈥�; early years influence; and health.
Example 3: There are several issues which need to be addressed: the size of the group sample; the sex and age of the respondents; the length of time they have lived in the city; and the type of work they are involved in.
Note: If each item in the list is more than a few words long then it is more usual to separate them with a semi-colon (;) rather than a comma.
Note: avoid using a colon before a list when it directly follows a verb or preposition that would ordinarily need no punctuation in that sentence.
Incorrect I want: butter, sugar, and flour.
Correct I want butter, sugar, and flour.
Incorrect: She has visited all the islands, including: Mull, Iona, and Orkney. 脳
Correct: She has visited all the islands, including Mull, Iona, and Orkney.
Apostrophes (鈥�)
The apostrophe is used to
(a) show that letters are missing (contraction)
(b) indicate ownership (possession)
Contractions: are not normally used in academic writing When letters are missing in a word and the word becomes shorter, the apostrophe is used to show where the missing letters have been left out.
I am > I鈥檓
You will > You鈥檒l
Contractions are used in informal writing. Essays and reports should not contain informal writing. Words should be written in full.
Possession:
Apostrophes are also used to show that something belongs to something else. Look at the examples and note the position of the apostrophe.
The boy鈥檚 football - the boy owns one football
The boy鈥檚 footballs - the boy owns more than one football.
The boys鈥� football - the boys all share ownership of the one football.
The boys鈥� footballs - the boys own several footballs.
Note the position of the apostrophe with these plural irregular nouns (e.g. children, people, men, women).
Incorrect: two childrens' hats
(the plural is children, not childrens)
Correct: two children's hats
(children + apostrophe + 鈥榮鈥� )
Incorrect: the twelve womens鈥� responses
(the plural is women, not womens)
Correct: the twelve women鈥檚 responses
(women + apostrophe + 鈥榮鈥�)
Incorrect: the peoples鈥� government
(the plural is 鈥榩eople鈥�, not 鈥榩eoples鈥�)
Correct: the people鈥檚 government
(people + apostrophe + 鈥榮鈥�)
Common problems with apostrophes:
滨迟蝉/颈迟鈥檚
The dog chewed its bone.
(no need for an apostrophe. 鈥榠ts鈥� is a pronoun which stands in for 鈥榯he dog鈥檚鈥� and indicates ownership.
It鈥檚 an amazing idea.
(A missing letter has been replaced by the apostrophe. 鈥業t鈥檚鈥� here really means 鈥榠t is鈥�.
奥丑辞蝉别/飞丑辞鈥檚
Whose books are these?
(Whose is a special kind of pronoun 鈥� like 鈥榠ts鈥� 鈥� which indicates ownership so there is no apostrophe.
Who鈥檚 arriving late?
(a missing letter has been replaced by the apostrophe, so 鈥榃ho鈥檚鈥� here really means 鈥榳ho is鈥�.
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